Star Wars – Balance in the Force Rey gets a message from her mom.

Mara Jade Skywalker: Rey my dear child there are so many things I want to tell you. Listen to your father he is a great man he can train you to be a powerful Jedi.

Your father and I met back when I was a smuggler hauling parts across the galaxy. I even worked for the Emperor Palpatine for a time. But fate led me to Luke and he took me in and trained me to use the Force. We fell in love and a few years later you were born.

It was a dangerous time. The Empire now the first order was hunting down and killing all force sensitive children. You were hidden on Jakku. Lor San Tekka and his people were on a crusade to spread church of the force religion. General Leia your aunt knew Lor San Tekka well and Luke and I trusted him. He allowed you to travel with him. You were only 5 and already were so powerful with the force. Luke and I wanted to keep you safe. I hope you forgive us.

I will always love you little one. May the force we with you… Always

Reys eyes full of tears. Luke leans in and embraces his daughter. Rey we love you so much. I hope you will forgive me.
Father I understand you did what you had to do. To keep me alive.


Star Wars Balance in the Force fan film starting to take shape.

I have been on a roll lately coming up with new script and images for my first Star Wars animated fan film title Star Wars Balance in the Force. Kylo Ren has had enough of Snoke manipulating him so he decides to spill the beans about Snokes secret experiments in hope to regain Lukes trust. We also dive into the origins of the force and yes we will be going way way back to the first day someone said. I have a bad feeling about this.

My Rey theory

Snoke used the dark side of the force to create Rey. He conjured the spirit of Anakin and took a egg from Mara Jade combined it with his sperm in a lab on Jakku. Mara then became pregnant with Rey gave birth before she married Luke. Snoke has been tampering with creation of life for hundreds of years thus caused a imbalance in the force. His plan is to harvest a new breed of dark Jedi. He is using Rey as an experiment. Snoke doesn’t realize that this awakening maybe his doom. There’s something very sinister stirring up in the galaxy far far away.
Mara Jade left a clue for Luke to discover inside his blue lightsaber as she wanted her daughter to someday know the truth about her family. Maz Kanata was the keeper if this secret when the time was right. Mara was the one who found lukes saber when she was in bespin

I feel like we are being watched

[On Achto island: A Black first order probe droid pops it head up out of the water]

[Hux is on the bridge of the Finalizer]

Hux: To a commanding officer. Has the probes brought back anything?

First Order officer: Yes sir we found them

Hux: Good I will inform Ren. [Contacts Ren on a Hologram image]

Ren we found them I am sending their coordinates now

Kylo: Excellent I have been waiting for this. I will summon The Knights of Ren to join me.

Hux: Dont fail this time Ren. Supreme leader Snoke wants the girl alive. Kill skywalker.

[Rey and Luke sense trouble.]

[Rey pushes the throttle forward the falcon speeds toward the mainland Achto away from the Island.]

Rey: I think we were tracked by a probe droid.

Luke: Yes I felt it as well

Luke: Artoos, scanners are pick up two ships [to himself] This does not look good.

Rey: [to Luke] We can handle them. [She pulls out her Staff and they both head down the ramp.]

Luke: You are going to need this back [Hands her the Blue Lightsaber][She sticks the staff into the ground]

Luke: Chewie, keep your eyes open. [They land near a grassy plain AHCH-TO Mainland]…. [Kylo Ren’s ship is landing.]

[It’s dark and raining hard, just like in Rey’s vision in TFA] [Luke and Rey walk down the ramp to a grassy field overlooking the water] This is the site of the Old Dead Tree we have seen on the real set.

Luke: [draws his green lightsaber] You will pay for what you did. [He uses the Force to hurl huge rocks and crushes two of the knights]

[Kylo’s ship is just landed – 3 knights come down the ramp of Kylos ship.. Ren is right behind them.]

Kylo Ren: I see you have reunited with your  scavenger daughter, whom you abandoned.

Luke: Stand behind me Rey..[ Luke and Rey stand back to back each one looking out for the other]

Kylo: [sneers] Leader Snoke just wants the girl. Its time for you to die my old master.

[Kylo extends his hand and throws a lightening bolt over to Luke. Which sends Luke flying back]

Rey: Master you have become old and weak

Luke: Ben You will pay for what you did.

[Lukes uses the force push and throws 2 huge boulders that crush 2 of the knights]

Kylo: Stop calling me Ben that name has no meaning for me..

Rey draws her saber and attacks one of Knights.

Artoo senses sees that they are in trouble and alerts Chewie to shoot his under belly canons toward the knights.

Rey sense this and leaps into the air to avoid the laser canon fire which takes out the knight.

Kylo sees his 3 dead knights and retreats back to his Ship. He flys low and sends a few laser Canons back at the Hutts in the distance. Chewie send a blast his way but Kylo force freezes it.

Kylo: [You have been taught well..Rey only Rey hears is voice]


What a piece of Junk – Luke Skywalker reunites with some old friends


[Rey realizes  they were walking and talking and by some magically portal they are back near the beach and see Millenium Falcon just up ahead]

Rey: How did you do that?

Luke: Ha Ha ..Shortcut …. old Jedi trick.
[Luke spot Chewie on top Falcon making some repairs]{Artoo has a fishing pole in his claw trying to catch something for dinner]

Luke: Hey Chewie… Artoo its good to see you both..

[Chewie turn his head and howls in joy to see his old friend. He climbs down and gives Luke a hug]

[Luke and Rey board the falcon. Luke puts his hand on Artoos head. Rey and Chewie get seated in front while Luke and Artoo are in second row of Falcon cockpit]

Luke:  You flew this hunk of Junk here? Where did you find it.

Chewie {Laughs}

Rey: I stole it from Unkar Plutt.

Luke: Ah yes Unkar Plutt – Lor San Tekka knew him well. Unkar looked after you when you were small.

Rey: He made me risk my life everytime I went into the Junkyard looking for spare parts.

Luke: Well Rey lets see what this old ships got.


Rey..I am your father


[Meditation Scene with Luke, and Yoda and Rey on Ahch-to. Luke and Yoda give Rey a glimpse of the past through a vision, which the article details. Luke and Yoda use Farsight]

Luke: Rey, I know you have many questions about your family. And you must know the truth…

Rey: What truth?

Yoda: A secret the Jedi council was hiding

Yoda: Arrogant we became.

Luke: Rey, take my hand. This may feel strange.

[Luke and Rey enter a dark chamber. Theres a single skylight illuminating the room.]

Rey: Where are we?

Luke: We are in the past.

Force Vision with the Holocron
“They see two children playing near a tree on an alien planet. The boy noticed that he had greater strength and intuition when he was closer to this tree. The girl noticed that the tree also made her brother increasingly angry. One day an argument breaks out between the children, and the boy kills the girl. The boy touches the tree and is ‘transformed’. He kills his parents and leaves the planet. Meanwhile, the girl is revealed to be alive, transformed by the tree as well, using her power to start the first Jedi Order.”

The scene continues to play out where the girl explains the force can be used for good and evil and one day, she would return (as a boy or girl) and she should be trained. Luke says the Jedi have been searching for the reincarnated one for a millennia and for a time, they thought Anakin Skywalker/ Darth Vader was “The One” who would restore balance to the force.

Luke: Rey… the Jedi Order spent millennia in secret seeking out the One. We identified children, trained millions of them to use the Force, but none of them turned out to be the One. We were wrong.. Our deception resulted in the Clone Wars.

Luke: The boy turned out to be my father, Anakin Skywalker, who later became Darth Vader. As you may know from legend he helped hunt down and kill nearly every living Jedi.

Luke: Rey, I want to take you to a new place.

[A new scene appears of a woman with red hair. (Mara Jade) Shes holding a small girl in her arms]


Rey: [tears come down Reys face]    That’s my mom?

Luke: Yes during happier times

Rey: Then why does she look so sad?

Luke: You had just been identified as strong with the Force. You left to begin your training but sadly never reached your destination, and the rest you know.

Luke: Rey, I am your father.


Some backstory about Mara Jade
Renouncing the dark side of the Force, Mara Jade trained as a Jedi under Kyle Katarn and at the Jedi Academy. Her loyalties to Talon Karrde’s organization remained strong, however; she aided his smuggling operations and hoped to take over his position one day.

Mara’s dormant Force abilities re-emerged after she encountered Luke Skywalker floating helpless in space in a damaged X-wing. Forced to suppress her desire to kill Luke so Karrde could collect a bounty on their captive, Mara soon found herself fighting with Luke against the Imperials.

Mara became pregnant with Rey during the Yuuzhan Vong invasion. Infected with a deadly Yuuzhan Vong disease, she was near death by the end of her pregnancy. However, she, Luke, and their newborn daughter, were able to join together and heal her through the power of the Force. Kylo and the knights of Ren killed all of Lukes Jedi younglings Mara was able to kill a few of them but she was fatally wounded and Luke let her pass away in peace to become one again with the force. Luke buried her near his village on Ach-to.

Luke: Your mother was very powerful in the light and darkside of the force. Her name was Mara Jade she worked for the Emperor Palpatine. She killed many Jedi but there was one Jedi who stopped her.

Luke: [turns toward Yoda] She is the last hope for the Jedi. I promise you, Master, I won’t fail. I won’t let Rey turn to the dark side.

Yoda: Begun it has. Time we have not. Until sunset we have to find the Jedi temple or consumed by the dark side she will be.

[Yoda fades away]